Thursday, February 26, 2009

Writer's Workshop - My Attempt at a Poem

MamaKat had some hard prompts this week for Writer's Workshop; but I decided to try out a poem....(ok, you can stop laughing now....I know I am not known for my great poem writing abilities); a poem using the letters of the alphabet to begin each line!!

WARNING: this will make you laugh...even though it's not meant too!!! :)

A little bit of affection goes a long way
Because a big hug/kiss can make my day
Come over here and tell me you love me
Don’t worry; it’s not hard, you will see
Every time we are together we have a lot of fun
From hanging out at home to basking in the sun
Give me a thank you and it makes me feel happy
Honey, you know I’m at times a little sappy
If I snap at you sometimes, please just let it go
Just get a little overwhelmed and feel like I am going to blow
Kissing and hugging usually leads to other stuff
Loving on you has never been tough
Me and You; we make a great pair
Nobody can break us; they better not dare
Only you can give me the butterflies
Peeking at you while you’re still sleeping, during the bright sunrise
Quietly I lay there and watch you as you sleep
Realizing that you are all mine to keep
Some days are crazy and we don’t get a minute together
Then I remember that we have forever
Up in heaven rests my mom and your dad
Very peaceful, although missing them makes us sad
When I am in your arms, nothing feels so good
Xspecially when you make me smile, like I knew you would
You never knew we would find such a great thing
Zoom on over here and give me a wedding ring!!!

BTW - How do you like my use of the letter X?? (you don't really think I talk that way... he-he)

10 comments:

Carrin said...

You did such a good job! That poem was great.
HMMM....What does Melissa want????

April said...

That was awesome! Great job!

Rachael said...

wow, you did a fantastic job, i loved it.

MommyDesiree said...

I don't know what you are talking about yours is great!

I hope the Easter bunny brings you the carat you're after LOL!

Saundra@ItalianMamaGoneCrazy said...

I skip the poems because I am afraid of them...
AND YOU KNOCKED IT OUT OF THE PARK!

Emily said...

ahhh... I love it... soo great.. I think you are good at writing poems! very good!

blueviolet said...

Awwwww...that was the sweetest poem! You poets are something else!

Mama Kat said...

That was great! I forgot it was supposed to be an ABC poem about halfway through because you blended it so well!

Los said...

Hmmm ... does your boyfriend read this blog?

Kristen said...

Did he Zoom? Where's the ring. He is gonna see your poem, right?